Feedback from Simon and John

We gave our pitch ideas to Simon and John and they had different opinions of them. John said that my idea of stereotypes was good but it needed something to make it more interesting, make it interesting enough for the audience. Simon however, liked the idea but didn't know if it would work well depending on the people that will be involved when we interview them. When I pitched the idea to my teacher, Tom. He said it could work and be a good idea depending on who we ask and the questions that we choose to ask, how many questions we include due to who we interview.

Documentary so far

Feedback of Rough Cut from Class

Need to have more cutaways to make it more interesting for the audience
Archive footage, magazines, facebook/twitter as they talk about different social medias that they use.
Interview more people to get more opinions, more of a range of views on the subject.
Change the framing of some of the shots, make it look different when we talk to both Evie and Charlie. As it is exactly the same shot so gets a bit boring having the same location, same scenery
Add some music over cutaways (people on their phones) to show just how much people use them to go on media platforms like twitter, Facebook, instagram etc.